Project 1 Progress

So far, I have gotten most of my introduction written. -That including the syntheses. Although I do still need to add more to my synthesis! I want to find more people or sources to relate it all together. I need to start writing my body though. But at the same time, how much do I really need to write?.. What is the difference if I state (for a paragraph or two) bullet points rather than making a full paragraph? I think because my paper is dealing with the flow.. It can all be different. I plan on getting a few more sources and using what I have learned (from what we have been doing in class) to add to everything. I would also like to add more basic information or examples to my topic. I need to do more research on flow. I really liked the workshop. I hope that we can have more of those. Personally, it really made it a lot easier for someone else to read what I wrote so that they can tell me what they liked or didn't. I was able to get more ideas from other people and I believe that in the long run that will help with everything.